Brief on the Iraq War
Thesis: The US government should pull US soldiers out of Iraq immediately because the benefits are not worth the costs.
Reason: Many lives have been lost and the trillions of dollars spent on the Iraq war have accomplished nothing in Iraq.
Evidence: The total casualty count of the Iraqi war is 4168 (http://icasualties.org/oif/default.aspx).
Evidence: Not many accomplishments have been made for the amount of casualties and the money spent (http://www.usaid.gov/iraq/accomplishments/).
Reason: Who is America to say that the Iraq government was not sufficient enough to sustain the citizens and try to intervene and implement a democratic government?
Evidence: ("We are there to complete a mission, and it's an important mission," he said. "A democratic Iraq is in the interests of the United States, and it's in the interests of laying the foundation for peace." – G.W. Bush) Bush only wants to stay in Iraq for American interests and he is not concerned about the Iraqi citizens’ interest (http://edition.cnn.com/2005/US/06/24/bush.iraq/).
Evidence: Not every citizen of Iraq wants a democratic government and lives lost in the war are lost in vain.
Evidence: A democratic government in Iraq most of the time will never come to a consensus because of the Shiite and Sunni conflict.
Edited: Just testing the edit option =o
1 comment:
Just make sure your sources are credible. Everything else looks good and I'm definitely interested to see what you too propose doing about this issue.
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